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What do you think of my novel, The Shadow Chaneller
The Shadow Channeler | Chapter 14 | 4/26/08
GUESS WHAT~@@@!@!@!@!~@!@$$!@#^#%*r$!!! MY WRITERS BLOCK IS OVER WOOOT! A special thanks to bella, who's encouragement made me start writing again. So I finished chapter 14, reached my 20,000 word (and a lot over, it's a fairly long chapter) so I hope you all like it! Thanks bella, and every one else who's reading my book so far!
So uh, also, What do you guys think of my newly added signature picture? The song is very fast, but it's hilarious, and kamokronos (WHO MADE IT! I DID NOT MAKE IT!!!) will slow it down as soon as she can. Try to read it yourself though. Man, chapter 14 is pretty dang good! Here it is!:
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Chapter 14 and for future posts...
It's very sad that bella cant go on this site besides posting her book, as she seemed to really like my novel
. Ah well, strict parents and all that. Glad I don't have them
lol. This site has been dead the last few weeks. Only person In saw on is kamokronos, and that has been like what, twice? Strange :S. Anyway, any opinionn on my novel so far, anyone? (echo) (echo).... lol. Ah well. Guess that's that. Problem is, all my friends at school have a smaller I.Q. then a doorknob, and, well, next year, I'll hardly know any one there. So there goes my book. I'll probably keep writing it, I guess. I'm not one to give up it just sucks that all my friends (not you guys) are idiots! -.- Anyway, if anyone has read chapter 14 yet, chapter 15 may be released in like... well probably this week, at any rate. There's no set time for chapters, I write them when I feel like it, as I believe being forced to write something for fun reduces its' enjoyablility. Meaning that I could write 3 chapters in one day, like I've done before, or not write any in almost 2 weeks, like I have also done before. The mechanisims of my mind are an enigma O.O. lol, anyway, happy reading all. I also posted this to put my novel on top of scrolling thing. New comers won't even know it exists if I don't O.o. Bye, happy reading or whatever. lol.
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Re: Featured Novel: The Shadow Channeler | Chapter 27 ('Just a simple uber w00t shall do it :)') | 03/08/08 | Rated 5 Stars
I'll be sure to catch up before you post chapter 15
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Re: Featured Novel: The Shadow Channeler | Chapter 27 ('Just a simple uber w00t shall do it :)') | 03/08/08 | Rated 5 Stars
Same, I've been busy with things and I've been getting behind. I'll try to catch up soon, lol.
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The Shadow Channeler | Chapter 15 | 4/29/08
Sorry if I don't update the title and stuff, but please, Digger, maybe, can you do it for me? I mean seriously, I'm probably going to make my computer explode. I mean, change the title, date, ugh so annoying. Anyway, if it's a must, I'll do it myself. ANYWAY, WOO CHAPTER 15 IS RELEASED. And yes, I wrote it solely to prove kamo wrong. "I'll catch up before chapter 15." WRONG, IN YOUR FACE!! lol just kidding. Anyway, So, yeh chapter 15 is pretty decent, actually ,hope you all like it! Edit: Just fixed chapters, it's a pain but not that hard. Discount everything I previously said lol
Anyway, happy reading, hope you like my chapter. Here it is:
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Re: Featured Novel: The Shadow Channeler | Chapter 27 ('Just a simple uber w00t shall do it :)') | 03/08/08 | Rated 5 Stars
...If, in the future, and the site became very popular, it would be nigh impossible for me to read every single chapter of every single book that got posted here
. But I'll do my best.
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Re: Featured Novel: The Shadow Channeler | Chapter 27 ('Just a simple uber w00t shall do it :)') | 03/08/08 | Rated 5 Stars
Yeh, but, but IM SPECIAL! lol jk. I understand that, of course, although I'm the only person (besides you) currently posting a lot of chapters, as far as I" know. I mean ,some people are posting a few chapters, but I think I've posted the most in such a short time (although they are sometimes shorter then most) Anyway, kamo, I understand that. Hopefully the site WILL get popular, though, As itd be awesome if a lot of people read my book. I think only like.... 4 or5 have read it (bella and inheritance now stopped though
inheritance is probably busy....and bella is bye bye lol ) so, if people actualy came on that'd be awesome, right? Anyway, guess what everyone? Most of you probably dont care, BUT I FOUND A GLITCH IN SUPER SMASH BROS BRAWL!! It's not that amazing, but it's always kool to know you're the first (at least I think I am....dang youtube lol) Ya'know? Anyway, that's it everyone. Bye.
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Re: Featured Novel: The Shadow Channeler | Chapter 27 ('Just a simple uber w00t shall do it :)') | 03/08/08 | Rated 5 Stars
Nooooooo! Why did you do that? And where's the other chapters? Write more! I really hope that it's all a trick and you didn't really just kill off Zuthis. That is so not cool if you did. The book is really good, though. Not something I would expect a twelve-year-old to write. Good news: My parents have decided that I can talk to you, Digger, and Kamo. So, maybe they're not so unrelenting. Post more! Can't wait till ya do. Oh, don't forget to check Fight out Saturday or Sunday. I'm going to post the second chapter.

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Re: Featured Novel: The Shadow Channeler | Chapter 27 ('Just a simple uber w00t shall do it :)') | 03/08/08 | Rated 5 Stars
I fixed all of your chapter titles (it doesn't seem like much, but thats a lot of typing o.O). I've been busy lately, it's been a hectic week. Especially with my fever...Anyways, the 7th and 8th graders are going to Silver Dollar City tomorrow! Hope I'm not sick still...that'd seriously stink..
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Re: Featured Novel: The Shadow Channeler | Chapter 27 ('Just a simple uber w00t shall do it :)') | 03/08/08 | Rated 5 Stars
Lol, I hope you get better soon, Digger. And Bella, I'm glad to hear you can talk to us, but what about the other members of the forum? Just asking, because your parents know that we have Admins and Mods, and a TOS here, so if people break the rules and put something they shouldn't, we'll find it, or people can press the Report Abuse at the bottom of the page
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thanks everyone
Digger, you made a mistake! YOU PUT IT TO CHAPTER 1!! lol, anyway, bella, 14 chapters are posted, you read them all? wow, anyway Thanks, and I'll post more asap ok? Maybe today? Bye and great that you can talk with us
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HOLY MOLY GUACAMOLE WITH ANCHOVIES! CHAPTER 16 OUT WOOT!
Omg! Chapter 16 out, with such an amazing ending it pwns EVEN CHAPTER FIVES ENDING, and for those who have read, chapter 5 is uber stunning right? I can't do better, right? WRONG! Huge secret revealed in chapter 16 and I mean huge. About 11 chapters-long huge O.o. Anyway, hurry n read whoever is at this part, and if you're not READ UP TO THIS PART SO YOU CAN READ THIS ONE! And, by the way guys, to report an abuse, I suggest, if you want immediate response, send to me, as I am on a lot more (trust me) then probably any one else, as I just like looking at stuff on this site. Of course, send it to others too, but for the quickest response (most of the time) you can send it to me. Obvisouly, though, send it to other mod and admins after sending it to me. Anyway, here is chapter 16, HURRY N READ OMG! Here it is, pay attention to last paragraph:
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Any comments?
Any one got comments on chapter 16? I'm very proud of it and I'd really appreciate a response. Thanks for whoever posts one
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Chapter 17! It's out! Yay!
Hey all! Chapter 17 is out! Yay! It's a not a very action-y chapter, though it does have a bit of comedy, which kinds of balances it out (or not, sorry I do the best I can
) So I hope you enjoy it! For those who are following the story, ( and if you're not, you should!) Can you please post your comments on the chapters so far? I'd really like some opininon. I mean, I donno! It's the weekend and the no one's on!
Anyway, I hope you all like Chapter 17, which also introduces a new character, which gives you a second prospective on the (contains a spoiler)
Anyway, here it is! Please read and comment on it, I think it's great and funny! Edit: Omg, I'm really mad that the word d-a-m-n (sorry) has been bleeped on here! Now my novel doesn't sound that good. I mean sometimes it uses some specific words like that to make it sound better (the worst word I use is that word, actually, any other swear words are replaced by other words made up in the novel) For example for those who read it, Chapter 6, paragraph two, now it sounds really bad. Ah well. I'm mad about that. Edit 2: Agh! A-s-s-a-s-s-i-n-a-t-i-o-n is bleeped now too! Probably because of the first three letters of the word, but still, that's an annoying glitch, as that word is used several times in this chapter! I mean come on it's getting a lil drastic here. Any one agree? I mean, using those words in post is one thing, but using them in a novel to spice it up isn't offense. Anyway, admin(s) is (are) boss, so that's that. Ah, well, either way, don't let it stop you from reading the novel!!
. Here it is:
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Anyway, here it is! Please read and comment on it, I think it's great and funny! Edit: Omg, I'm really mad that the word d-a-m-n (sorry) has been bleeped on here! Now my novel doesn't sound that good. I mean sometimes it uses some specific words like that to make it sound better (the worst word I use is that word, actually, any other swear words are replaced by other words made up in the novel) For example for those who read it, Chapter 6, paragraph two, now it sounds really bad. Ah well. I'm mad about that. Edit 2: Agh! A-s-s-a-s-s-i-n-a-t-i-o-n is bleeped now too! Probably because of the first three letters of the word, but still, that's an annoying glitch, as that word is used several times in this chapter! I mean come on it's getting a lil drastic here. Any one agree? I mean, using those words in post is one thing, but using them in a novel to spice it up isn't offense. Anyway, admin(s) is (are) boss, so that's that. Ah, well, either way, don't let it stop you from reading the novel!!
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Chapter 18 out! WOOT! Plus a special bonus! Read on!
K good thing i copy pasted this, as it all got deleted for some reason. Here it is again
Hey, woot! Guess what? Chapter 18 is done! Yay! I even have a kool,
though useless, surprise! But more about that later! So in chapter 18,
I won't say too much, but we go back to Hog, and if you've been
following, that'll be exciting, but first we have a long paragraph
about Hazul. Anwyay, I hope you all like it, might be a while til next
chater comes...Or not. Lol
I THINk this chapter is a lil short, but
oh well, that's that, eh? Anyway.... Here it is:
Oh, yeh well this is only for people who have read the chapter, but I
guess you haven't read it first and youre reading this now, right? Well
hopefully my guilt will drive you to read it first, but if not, oh well
;D. Ok, so about my surprise! No, you don't get anything ( I can hear
the AWWW's! from here...lol) and no it's not a contest, it's actualy
something I wrote! About a month ago, there was a contest from J. K.
Rowling. She made 7 copies of The Beedle and the Bard, which has
secrets of killing Voldemort in it. Copies is a bit misleading, though,
as they are HAND WRITTEN AND PICTURES HAND DRAWN BY THE AUTHOR HERSELF!
Duh, since there are only 7, they are extremely valuble, and amazon
bought one for like a few billion (or million, who cares; its a lout of
money, that's it lol =D ) They are now holding a contest to go to
London, England to actualy see a copy of the book, which is like, an
uber privaledge, because they were actualy restricted to only see a few
pages of the book on the news. So, that's not the surprise, because the
time for entry it over. I'm REALLY mad, because I live in Quebec (yes,
this is the only time in the world I'll ever tell you the province I
live in) Canada, And in entry place, where it says "choose country" it
says, Canada (excluding Quebec) What the heck is that! What they got
against Quebec, and why cant I enter? Ah well, Either way, I wrote a
entry for the contest. It was the following. In 100 words or less,
write one of the following things.
A sport that wizards play, besides Quidditch
What song they sing at parties
What did u learn in Harry Potter that you apply in everyday life.
I choose the first one. Keep in mind that it has to be 100 words or
less, which is very difficult. Even though I can't enter, I found that
out after I made this, so hell, here it is! Tell me how you feel about
it, and if it woulda been worth it of me to enter! IT DOSE NOT have to
be a poem, but I choose that. Anyway, that's the surprise, sorry if
you're disapointed, I do what I can :/ lol
Hey, woot! Guess what? Chapter 18 is done! Yay! I even have a kool,
though useless, surprise! But more about that later! So in chapter 18,
I won't say too much, but we go back to Hog, and if you've been
following, that'll be exciting, but first we have a long paragraph
about Hazul. Anwyay, I hope you all like it, might be a while til next
chater comes...Or not. Lol
oh well, that's that, eh? Anyway.... Here it is:
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Oh, yeh well this is only for people who have read the chapter, but I
guess you haven't read it first and youre reading this now, right? Well
hopefully my guilt will drive you to read it first, but if not, oh well
;D. Ok, so about my surprise! No, you don't get anything ( I can hear
the AWWW's! from here...lol) and no it's not a contest, it's actualy
something I wrote! About a month ago, there was a contest from J. K.
Rowling. She made 7 copies of The Beedle and the Bard, which has
secrets of killing Voldemort in it. Copies is a bit misleading, though,
as they are HAND WRITTEN AND PICTURES HAND DRAWN BY THE AUTHOR HERSELF!
Duh, since there are only 7, they are extremely valuble, and amazon
bought one for like a few billion (or million, who cares; its a lout of
money, that's it lol =D ) They are now holding a contest to go to
London, England to actualy see a copy of the book, which is like, an
uber privaledge, because they were actualy restricted to only see a few
pages of the book on the news. So, that's not the surprise, because the
time for entry it over. I'm REALLY mad, because I live in Quebec (yes,
this is the only time in the world I'll ever tell you the province I
live in) Canada, And in entry place, where it says "choose country" it
says, Canada (excluding Quebec) What the heck is that! What they got
against Quebec, and why cant I enter? Ah well, Either way, I wrote a
entry for the contest. It was the following. In 100 words or less,
write one of the following things.
A sport that wizards play, besides Quidditch
What song they sing at parties
What did u learn in Harry Potter that you apply in everyday life.
I choose the first one. Keep in mind that it has to be 100 words or
less, which is very difficult. Even though I can't enter, I found that
out after I made this, so hell, here it is! Tell me how you feel about
it, and if it woulda been worth it of me to enter! IT DOSE NOT have to
be a poem, but I choose that. Anyway, that's the surprise, sorry if
you're disapointed, I do what I can :/ lol
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